I praised this game heavily when I played it at v0.16. I just finished a new playthrough of v0.18, and I'm not super impressed. I called it "The best Fallout Game ever made." Today I would say, "It's a Fallout knockoff. What I found clever and interesting before is degraded here.
I like your game, and I'm not trying to be a dick, but content wise, v0.18 ends in EXACTLY the same place as v0.16. The plot has NOT moved forward even ONE TEXT BOX.
Instead, what you did was flesh out previous content. That wouldn't be bad, except you ended up overlaying a TON of continuity errors onto your script. You're not a great note taker are you?
You added a bunch of bullshit Michael Bey-esque cut scenes to the game, but the repeatable porn scenes are so tedious that they should be avoided. The ONLY repeatable sex scenes in the game WORTH REPEATING are Pepper's. Then, you make the series of acts to get to fuck her like 6 events long, but only three are repeatable.
And the sex scene that you did add, taking Mernieth's virginity, has no choices except to cum inside or out. It's just another kinetic string of text boxes. Dull, and anti-climactic after all that build up.
I made Fairy my slave, but can't command her to fuck me.
The only way to get Kateryna into the sex acts is to try to fuck the MC's stalker daughter. There isn't even an option to have just solo sex with the stalker daughter.
The entire quest line surrounding Lirah is so poorly conceived, that I struggle to believe that you actually wrote it.
First of all, Lirah is still loyal to the queen. She is just tired of politics not being what the propaganda promised. At this point in time, the MC has had the queen sobbing on his shoulder over the same topic. This should be EASY to explain to her.
On top of that, the MC has a daughter that is a stalker, without a history with Lira, whom he could send out to teach her the ways of the wasteland, but doesn't even consider her existence.
And the MC's daughter is a MUCH more logical way for Lirah to want the MC's cock than leaving her with the slutty palace guard.
On top of that, in order for you to force the palace guard scenario onto us, the MC has to sneak the girl into the city, although the MC has pointed out that she could never do so again, and the queen threatening to kill her.
On top of THAT you actually have her smuggling banned technology into the city, just to keep the scavenger story going. Why? You have a beat up trained guard, and the MC needs a guard for his growing harem. You know, for the times that he and his stalker daughter (whom you can't remember exists) are out on missions.
But you sure are proud of those Michael Bey-esque cut scenes, aren't you.
Anyway, I do hope that you figure out whether you want to make a porn game or some generic action bullshit. Personally, I hope it's porn, but if I come back to v0.20 to find just a bunch more bullshit cut scenes and boring porn, I will tank this game on Steam.
You're too big for me to crush, but I will dent your sales for sure. When I write a review for a game like this, it tends to stay number one for eternity with hundreds of votes. Well, unless the Dev can manage to get it banned.
Good, luck dude. Like I said, I like you game, but I seriously think that you have a lot of thinking to do.
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I praised this game heavily when I played it at v0.16. I just finished a new playthrough of v0.18, and I'm not super impressed. I called it "The best Fallout Game ever made." Today I would say, "It's a Fallout knockoff. What I found clever and interesting before is degraded here.
I like your game, and I'm not trying to be a dick, but content wise, v0.18 ends in EXACTLY the same place as v0.16. The plot has NOT moved forward even ONE TEXT BOX.
Instead, what you did was flesh out previous content. That wouldn't be bad, except you ended up overlaying a TON of continuity errors onto your script. You're not a great note taker are you?
You added a bunch of bullshit Michael Bey-esque cut scenes to the game, but the repeatable porn scenes are so tedious that they should be avoided. The ONLY repeatable sex scenes in the game WORTH REPEATING are Pepper's. Then, you make the series of acts to get to fuck her like 6 events long, but only three are repeatable.
And the sex scene that you did add, taking Mernieth's virginity, has no choices except to cum inside or out. It's just another kinetic string of text boxes. Dull, and anti-climactic after all that build up.
I made Fairy my slave, but can't command her to fuck me.
The only way to get Kateryna into the sex acts is to try to fuck the MC's stalker daughter. There isn't even an option to have just solo sex with the stalker daughter.
The entire quest line surrounding Lirah is so poorly conceived, that I struggle to believe that you actually wrote it.
First of all, Lirah is still loyal to the queen. She is just tired of politics not being what the propaganda promised. At this point in time, the MC has had the queen sobbing on his shoulder over the same topic. This should be EASY to explain to her.
On top of that, the MC has a daughter that is a stalker, without a history with Lira, whom he could send out to teach her the ways of the wasteland, but doesn't even consider her existence.
And the MC's daughter is a MUCH more logical way for Lirah to want the MC's cock than leaving her with the slutty palace guard.
On top of that, in order for you to force the palace guard scenario onto us, the MC has to sneak the girl into the city, although the MC has pointed out that she could never do so again, and the queen threatening to kill her.
On top of THAT you actually have her smuggling banned technology into the city, just to keep the scavenger story going. Why? You have a beat up trained guard, and the MC needs a guard for his growing harem. You know, for the times that he and his stalker daughter (whom you can't remember exists) are out on missions.
But you sure are proud of those Michael Bey-esque cut scenes, aren't you.
Anyway, I do hope that you figure out whether you want to make a porn game or some generic action bullshit. Personally, I hope it's porn, but if I come back to v0.20 to find just a bunch more bullshit cut scenes and boring porn, I will tank this game on Steam.
You're too big for me to crush, but I will dent your sales for sure. When I write a review for a game like this, it tends to stay number one for eternity with hundreds of votes. Well, unless the Dev can manage to get it banned.
Good, luck dude. Like I said, I like you game, but I seriously think that you have a lot of thinking to do.